good job.
i take it english isn't your first language. for your next movie, you should get someone to do the voices, and maybe someone to check your script to make your sentences sound more natural. i highly suggest doing this.
you're drawing is great. i don't see anything wrong with it. the only problem is the script and voices. if you do this with your next movie, and the visuals are even close to this movie's, i'm sure it'll get atleast a 3.8/5. you have incredible talent and promise, all you have to do now is fix the voices and sentences. that's all.