i take it english isn't your first language. for your next movie, you should get someone to do the voices, and maybe someone to check your script to make your sentences sound more natural. i highly suggest doing this.
you're drawing is great. i don't see anything wrong with it. the only problem is the script and voices. if you do this with your next movie, and the visuals are even close to this movie's, i'm sure it'll get atleast a 3.8/5. you have incredible talent and promise, all you have to do now is fix the voices and sentences. that's all.
Okay then ill try fixing it, Correct! English is not my first language and you know what! I have been thinking too, finding people to do the scripting work and voice acting but when I think again who will want to do that with my movie?hm...it still kept me thinking any way thanks for the reviews and to all the reviewer of Doll Ville The nice guy
Dane333 is retarded.
i hate immature little kids that trash talk and make fun of other people's work, even though they've never even TRIED to make anything. so ignore that little bastard's comment.
anyway, that was an amazing first flash. it was very detailed (loved the stuff in the room) and didn't have sticks. very, very good job. i hope you make some more movies, i'll be waiting for them.
there is little we can do but make fun of them. >.>
thankx for the overall rating. ^_^
all the stuff works for flash MX, i'm sure. maybe you could figure out what AS stuff is added in flash 8 from MX, and include that stuff. i'd like to know that.
I'll get there eventually, but to tell you the truth, I'm not the best at flash...yet.
there's a bug
i guess last time you updated this thing, you accidentally left the initial level to be 30 or something. because now when I play it, it starts on level 30. And then I die in about 10 seconds. so fix it and re-upload it so i can play it again :)
by the way, i deleted my internet files and cookies and reloaded the game, and it didn't fix it. so its gotta be something in the code.
VERY SORRY! I WAS TESTING AND FORGOT TO CHANGE IT BACK TO START AT LVL 1...
SHOOOOOOOOOOOOOT. Stupid me
*bangs head on wall*
"bringbackthemonkey" is retarded.
ignore the last review. apparently he doesn't realize that it's pretty damn difficult to make something ENTIRELY ORIGINAL that nobody else has ever come close to making before. i'd like to see that little kid even TRY to make a movie/game. people like that bother me.
as for your game, i thought it was pretty good. i'd suggest putting the stick guys more frequently, and making the chance for a "good" stick guy to appear greater. maybe it was just bad luck, but all i saw for like 15 people were the animal protection guys :(
also, i'd like it if you could control the squirrel in the air. like maybe with the arrow keys or something. and just a little bit. right now it feels like when the squirrel gets in the air i can't cnotrol anything, except the bazooka thing. oh, and the bazooka seems to last way too long. but other than those things, this was a pretty good flash. good job.
i recognize that music.
"Solemn", by Raza. i'm using it in my game that i'm making. good job in making a fun and attractive puzzle game.
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